Haiku of the Day (Raquel)

 I’m not sure this is even really a haiku, but whatever it is I’m posting it in honor of the changing season.

 

cold feet
cold floor
cold shoes 

September 20th 2006 Posted to Poems and Stories, Raquel

Comments

  1. Barb
    September 21st, 2006 | 7:22 am

    Because this is my favorite time of the year, I feel compelled ot add to your haiku:

    cold feet - warm dogs
    cold floor - warm afghan
    cold shoes - warm socks

  2. Raquel
    September 21st, 2006 | 8:13 am

    I like it. :-)

  3. Raquel
    September 21st, 2006 | 8:20 am

    Hmm, I just noticed that this would count as you writing haiku. Have you considered joining us over the renga blog?

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