Haiku of the Day (Raquel)

my pen full of ink
it’s my thoughts
that run dr

June 13th 2008 Posted to Poems and Stories, Raquel

Comments

  1. Raquel
    June 13th, 2008 | 9:10 am

    My original version of this haiku actually had a ‘y’ at the end of the word dry. The current version is a toddler-induced-typo that I didn’t catch until just now. But it does seem rather amusing in the context of this haiku…
    So I’m taking a poll: should I leave it as is or replace the ‘y’ at the end?

  2. Seth Ben-Ezra
    June 13th, 2008 | 9:28 am

    LOL.

    It’s awesome just like this. Perfect.

    Serendipity.

  3. Jeremy Beach
    June 13th, 2008 | 12:20 pm

    Leave it as is. I actually thought it was intentional.

  4. James
    June 13th, 2008 | 4:56 pm

    you know, if it weren’t for the comments I would have thought it was a typo. :)

  5. Barb
    June 13th, 2008 | 8:31 pm

    I thought it was intentional and inspired. Leave it the way it is and thank that toddler.

  6. Raquel
    June 16th, 2008 | 6:20 am

    Alright, the people have spoken–this haiku is officially y-less, whether the unenlightened mock my typing skills or not. :-)

  7. Adiel
    June 16th, 2008 | 7:07 am

    Sorry I’m late in responding. I love the y-lessness. I thought it was intentional, too!

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