Comments on: Showdown Part 2 (Gabrielle) http://sharppointythings.blogpeoria.com/2009/06/02/showdown-part-2-gabrielle/ Thu, 19 Nov 2009 16:36:28 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: Adiel http://sharppointythings.blogpeoria.com/2009/06/02/showdown-part-2-gabrielle/comment-page-1/#comment-51033 Adiel Sun, 14 Jun 2009 00:40:42 +0000 http://sharppointythings.blogpeoria.com/?p=1211#comment-51033 "There was no place like a bar in a base town. There were enough uniforms to feel like you belonged and enough civilians to remember why you fought. Ty was busy getting a good look at four very good reasons to wear a uniform that were sitting at a table by themselves." I love this short bit here. Pure writing genius! It took me a while to get around to reading all the Showdown posts, but I'm glad I finally did. And I was so right about who was who! You can keep writing like this, you know. I like that your style can branch out from your usual tales. Diversity is a beautiful thing. “There was no place like a bar in a base town. There were enough uniforms to feel like you belonged and enough civilians to remember why you fought. Ty was busy getting a good look at four very good reasons to wear a uniform that were sitting at a table by themselves.”

I love this short bit here. Pure writing genius!

It took me a while to get around to reading all the Showdown posts, but I’m glad I finally did. And I was so right about who was who!

You can keep writing like this, you know. I like that your style can branch out from your usual tales. Diversity is a beautiful thing.

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